http://www.informador.com.mx/1490/abuso-de-autoridad
The following news talk about the abuse of power from the authorities
It relates to the book because it portrays an unfair reality and the way the least privilged deal with it.
This is quite lazy work, you are capable of much better.
1. Your introductory paragraph explaining the article should state the subject of the article clearly. You should then explain the links you have drawn between the subject of the article and the themes of the book.
2. My Spanish isn't great, but I didn't find anything in the article that related to 'the way the least privileged' deal with 'unfair reality'. The main topic - mild police corruption in extorting a fine on a minor pretext - could be related to the mild abuse of power the pigs display, but you have not drawn this parallel.
Given the multitude of stories of contemporary struggles for freedom, against exploitation or examples of power and corruption, you could have chosen better material and presented it more eloquently.
I hope you show a return to your previous excellent form in your next assignment.
This is quite lazy work, you are capable of much better.
ResponderEliminar1. Your introductory paragraph explaining the article should state the subject of the article clearly. You should then explain the links you have drawn between the subject of the article and the themes of the book.
2. My Spanish isn't great, but I didn't find anything in the article that related to 'the way the least privileged' deal with 'unfair reality'. The main topic - mild police corruption in extorting a fine on a minor pretext - could be related to the mild abuse of power the pigs display, but you have not drawn this parallel.
Given the multitude of stories of contemporary struggles for freedom, against exploitation or examples of power and corruption, you could have chosen better material and presented it more eloquently.
I hope you show a return to your previous excellent form in your next assignment.